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Zero Suit Samus

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A reline and recolor of a past deviation for my better half

Pencil drawing and Color; me
Fabulous lines =Queen-Yarbo
Samus; Metroid-Nintendo
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712x900px 431.21 KB
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Very nice pose is what i want to start off with this critique! I really like the pose,

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> What Needs work

- anatomy needs some tweaking! I know you are trying to make it look like her butt is closer to us, but by how skinny her arms and waist are, that large of a bum is a bit out of proportion! I would say shrink it down some and bring that line defining the end of the left leg in alot. I would say almost to where the line of her clothing is coming dow her leg (not that far but closer to it).

- the gun needs some work; try referencing actual hand guns and tweak them a bit to get sci-fi look. It looks like she's holding a boomerang atm.

- this is completely an opinion on style, but her face is done so well with the shading and colours, i'd say instead of using the dodge and burn tools for her hair and outfit, to match the shading of her face, pick a darker shade and a lighter one and colour the hair more crisp like, instead of soft.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red"/> What works

- I love love love the face so much! absolutely perfect! I wouldn't change a thing with her face, so well done!

- The style of the hair, and upper body is done very very well! i love the glow of her back!

- the shine to her hair, butt, shoulder and boob are nice added touches. Just watch where you positioned it on her butt, makes it look like there's another light coming from the right but there's no signs of that light on the rest of her body.


<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue"/> Over all

- anatomy needs some work, and tweak the shading.
- would've loved to see a bit more detailed background then just a standard gradient. Backgrounds a bit boring
- reference reference reference when it comes to something you don't normally draw, aka the gun
- great facial colouring/drawing, really done well!
- love the whisps of the hair and shines of the body suit, really nice added touches
- love the pose and expression!!